Koenigsegg's Predator Application

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Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by Koenigsegg » 24 Dec 2017, 10:12

Byond ID: Koenigsegg

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): I mostly play Amanda 'Coyote' Harlinde, Nalah 'Dove' Vegas and recently Kimikyo 'Lys' Satsuki.

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Y'nvok Ikthah (Blood Wild)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background): I can't say that I'm the best at writing stories and whatnot, nor that I am creative enough to write a complete, fully detailed story. So please bear with me, I'll try my best! Forgive me if there is any grammar error and other things along the line. Be lenient as I'm not used to write this kind of stuff, although I really want to do something nice and serious! ^^"
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)? I intend to play a predator that'd be very playful. As in, torment and harass a prey for as long it is worthy prey. It'd be the same with the unworthy prey but in special circumstances for as long as I would be aware of them being unworthy. I wish to offer as much roleplay as possible to enjoy what each side can offer. Other than that, I'd be aiming toward a game of fear, if I may say. Especially with survivors, assuming they are willing and open to that kind of roleplay. If not doing anything of that, he'd observe a lot before taking action.

Why should we whitelist you? I believe that I can offer a good amount of roleplay to whoever would be willing to be my subject! Beside that, I did observe a lot of predator rounds as well as I did play with some, be it in a duel or any other silly situation. Honestly, being killed by a predator is much more preferable when I get to accept a duel rather than getting mindlessly killed by a one-click ravager. And that is exactly what I wish to offer to whoever might show interest in such end. Although I do not consider Predators to be the death incarnate and certainly not a mindless killer, more like a different way to play and an opportunity to roleplay something special. It has been several month since I wanted to apply for such role, but although I came occasionally on the forum to read the updates concerning the predators or player apps, I always thought it was very strict and incredibly complicated, especially when english is not my native language. I've been playing CM a lot and I wish to try my luck for something else that's less death-oriented and that'd eventually profit everyone and add a bit of immersion.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? I'd say no, considering I did not play for a while for personnal reason. I could be wrong but it is very unlikely.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? No. I am not currently banned from any server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I fully understand it.
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Re: Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by Steelpoint » 10 Jan 2018, 14:35

A good application in my mind meets three criteria. The player has good forum and in-game activity. A good player history. As well as a clear demonstration of you being able to play to a high RP standard and a good application.

In game wise I struggle to recall your character but it is vaguely familiar, I tend to play in the off time period however. HOWEVER your lack of forum activity and dubious in-game activity really strike a black mark.

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No bans is a positive boon.

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Your story has a few holes. I question why a "young" Predator is sent alone for an extended period of time for what is implied to be his first hunt. This would be wrong for a Unblooded, but would be somewhat acceptable for a Young Blood. Make the distinction.

The idea of hunting non-xenomorphs is a strong point. Predators hunt strong prey of all kinds, not just Xenomorphs or Humans.

Otherwise the story seems to hit the marks of sufficiently showing your knowledge of Predators. I think the story is decent either way. You could try and sprinkle in some more pred lore tidbits to further emphasize your understanding.

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For this application I'm leaning to giving a -1. The only thing holding you back, in my opinion, is your lack of forum and in game activity.

Improve your in game presence and forum presence, and I feel your application would past muster. Though I doubt you'll be accepted now, but in three months with some more activity you'll have a better shot.
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Re: Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by Feweh » 11 Jan 2018, 19:02

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Re: Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by TheMusician321 » 16 Jan 2018, 04:25

Story is alright, playstyle is a bit bland in my opinion as for your reason to whitelist, you're on point that's it's really strict and we could get booted out for a small fuck up.

My main problem is that I have absolutely no idea who you are, in-game activity is dubious and forum activity is even worse.

-1
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Re: Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by ghostdex » 16 Jan 2018, 17:41

TheMusician321 wrote:
16 Jan 2018, 04:25
Story is alright, playstyle is a bit bland in my opinion as for your reason to whitelist, you're on point that's it's really strict and we could get booted out for a small fuck up.

My main problem is that I have absolutely no idea who you are, in-game activity is dubious and forum activity is even worse.

-1
This pretty much sums up my thoughts, with the exception that making a somewhat non bland playstyle isn't the easiest thing ever so that part is somewhat understandable.

-1 from me, step up your activity.
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Re: Koenigsegg's Predator Application

Post by Shyguychizzy » 17 Jan 2018, 13:44

I'll further do indepth review of this later in the day. Your marine name chars you speak of are a bit familiar the one called coyote perhaps the others uncertain or unheard of....well none I have recalled over the years.
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