Sur'kajj Urun

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Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Surraen123 » 03 Jan 2018, 10:48

Byond ID: Surraen123

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Surraen Watch

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Sur'Kajj Urun

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I will be a predator who will challenge strong creatures and be faithful to the hunter's code.

Why should we whitelist you?
I wanted to have more PR with other races besides Xenomorphs and humans, besides I love Predators

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by NethIafins » 03 Jan 2018, 10:55

read this: http://colonial-marines.com/viewtopic.php?f=124&t=10293

this will be denied (unless I don't understand life)

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Snypehunter007 » 03 Jan 2018, 11:06

My god, this has to be one of the best predator applications I've ever seen.

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Robotic Potato » 03 Jan 2018, 11:11

This a truly amazing app, needs to be pinned as an example.

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by James5734 » 03 Jan 2018, 11:37

I am completely amazed by the back story, in those 3 sentences more emotion and literacy was displayed then I thought possible. The fact that this is your first post displays that you believe 100 percent that you are capable at getting accepted and that's something I can get behind. The fact that you didn't list a playstyle makes me really confident that each time you play, you'll have a unique spin on predator.

Overall, I say this is definitely worth a -1 and I can't wait to see you in game
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Shyguychizzy » 03 Jan 2018, 13:45

Right........my predator never had the opportunity to go to such training camp nor such to command my own fleet of xenomorphs. Slavery eh, all about enslavin them Humans and Xeno workforce however. Being of age of defined old and being first predator ever, its my greatest honor among our hunt to give you -1 for such a application as many others have said which I do agree.
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by TheMusician321 » 04 Jan 2018, 03:18

My god, this has to be the best application i've ever seen, the sheer amount of literary competence and emotion delivered in such a few sentences, clearly this man is the next William Shakespeare of Applications, I can see it now. Surraen123 getting the Pulitzer price for such an amazing story line with massive attention to detail and a gripping heart-warming and tragic story that touches on the impacts of slavery and the changes it has made in the protagonist's life.

but your forum account is only 1 day old.
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by TehSpoderman » 04 Jan 2018, 03:21

this puts all other pred apps to shame

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by shyshadow » 04 Jan 2018, 10:09

If I could describe this application in one word, it would be extraordinary. The sheer amount of work and effort put into this master piece of literature is that can rival only of the world's greatest minds. Albert Eienstein himself would be like, "Gawd damn, hella shmacking dawg." Fucking amazing.

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Redikal V » 06 Jan 2018, 01:12

Amazing app (no).

-1. Read another apps.
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by ghostdex » 06 Jan 2018, 01:25

One word, no. -1

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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by JKincaid » 08 Jan 2018, 15:59

Gonna have to -1 this.
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Gnorse » 09 Jan 2018, 14:50

If this doesn't get denied, Nothing will. This guy is the "Coldsteel the Hedgehog" of predators.

But for real, this is just embarassing. Read the application rules and check out some other apps.

-1 dude. Sorry.
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Re: Sur'kajj Urun

Post by Feweh » 11 Jan 2018, 19:02

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