The USS Osiris prologue

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The USS Osiris prologue

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 28 Nov 2017, 18:31

I have found out that writing stories help's me de-stress.

This will be the prologue of the events aboard the USS Osiris
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The year is 2179, on the planet of Lv-18. Due to lack of supplies, pirate raids, and no police force to keep order after the loss of the USCMC, only a few familes remain on the colony.

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Re: The misadventures of the Bambino Brigade

Post by TehSpoderman » 28 Nov 2017, 18:47

Can you separate the exposition into paragraphs? Its a bit messy looking at it the way it does now.
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Re: The Bambino Brigade Prolouge

Post by Gnorse » 01 Dec 2017, 18:27

This could be a great pass-time.
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Re: The Bambino Brigade Prolouge

Post by Thatnewguy1 » 04 Dec 2017, 13:40

And its finally done, now to move on to part 2
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