Weyland-Yutani Dossier - Edmund Faust

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Weyland-Yutani Dossier - Edmund Faust

Post by Bobalobdob » 28 Sep 2017, 00:12

WEYLAND-YUTANI PERSONNEL DOSSIER
Edmund Faust

Loaned to: USCM

Reviewed by: Harold Lester, Agent Bill Fischbach
Year of Birth: 2153
Country of Citizenship: Germany

Relatives -------------------------------
Hida Brunschwift - Mother
Friedrich Faust - Father
No Known Siblings
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Known Occupations --------------


Description of Appearance----
Brown Eyes
Brown hair, short
Brown square-styled moustache (for functionality and style)
5 feet 9 inches------------------------

Life------------------------------------------

Early childhood: irrelevant, nothing of note

Young adult: Edmund seems have been a troublemaker of sorts in his mid to late teens [15-19]. High School was a hard time. Although his test scores and extracurricular records indicate he has an above average intelligence, he did fail several courses and did extra programs to pull ahead and eventually graduate. He has demonstrated exceptional knowledge in the computer science field (take note, Bill, this stuff is important. -H.L.) and strength in multiple simulations centered around teamwork and tactical situations.

Adulthood - Pre enlistment:


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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by Bobalobdob » 28 Sep 2017, 18:28

Any feedback would be bueno, negative, positive, or constructive, it all helps
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by James5734 » 29 Sep 2017, 08:17

Bit snowflakey.... really snowflakey.... "byond" all comprehension of snowflakey...
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by Bobalobdob » 29 Sep 2017, 12:47

James5734 wrote:
29 Sep 2017, 08:17
Bit snowflakey.... really snowflakey.... "byond" all comprehension of snowflakey...
That is the goal. Being the most snowflakey while at the same time, at least making it semi-enjoyable. Its moatly a creative writing exercise for myself, seeing that I'm a terrible writer.
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by Bobalobdob » 27 Oct 2017, 02:41

My shitty dossier was updated :D
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by TehSpoderman » 24 Nov 2017, 19:59

i never seen someone so frosty in my life.
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by solidfury7 » 24 Nov 2017, 21:06

I'm not going to lie. This was a dissapointment.

The title made me expect a serious dossier, not an acid goop tier thread.

Not to mention that none of this would be deemed canon at all.

I personally say you start from scratch. Your writing style could be interesting but this is painfully snowflakey. And not in a good way, chum.

Best of luck.
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Re: Weyland-Yutani D.A.S #158 - Edmund Faust

Post by Bobalobdob » 26 Dec 2017, 03:03

solidfury7 wrote:
24 Nov 2017, 21:06
painfully snowflakey.
I agree :^)
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