Karcas Na-Rath

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Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Vispain » 30 Dec 2017, 22:57

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Cassius "Santa" Klaus

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Karcas Na-Rath

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
As a young one Karcas was a quiet individual born into a smaller clan with little prestige. His future was doomed to mediocrity if not for one key point in his life. One of his clan’s leaders managed to secure his training under a veteran retiree. His training was brutal and intense pushing him to the limits, but it also taught him valuable lessons. Karcas learned the way of the hunt and more. He learned from his teacher to always dedicate part of the hunt to Paya, establish a small shrine of some sort on his hunting grounds, and respect the prey that gives a worthy, honorable fight. After several years of training Karcas grew strong and ready. He admired his teacher and wanted more than just honor, glory and prestige for his clan and his name. He wanted to rise higher than his minor clan member ever had and dedicate his life to the Hunt. Of course...to attain prestige, rank and continue the grand hunt...he would first have to start it and prove himself. It is said everything has a beginning but what is not said is that some have to make their beginnings. Karcas Nar-Rath would have to make his own beginning. This is his time. He must now after several years of preparation and training prove himself to his clan and others by garnering a worthy trophy and rise up to bring glory to Paya.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
As a predator I would play with a style centered on roleplaying to further the events and actions. For example, as a SL and aSL I seek to build a relationship with my squad and would use that to succeed as well as just in general interact with my squaddies. This relates to a predator experience in that I would interact with other predators and use events with them and others to further my own ..and others personal story that develops for each and every person in CM. My main goal would be to avoid effecting the round in a harmful way, as expected, while making sure to 'make my presence known' in both subtle and obvious ways. Here are some examples: I might make a shrine to Paya, challenge a fellow predator to a friendly hunt, let marines see me occasionally or hear me which would give them opportunities to Role play both with their fellow USCM personnel and with me and other predators.
Hunting wise I would play with a style of observation to single out a suitable, worthy xenomorph (that would not, if killed be a great loss to the hive) and then attempt to honorably, as required, hunt and collect my trophy from it. As for marines I would generally scare, stalk and give some RP action for them to work with. I would also observe them for prospective, willing hunts.

Why should we whitelist you?
I really love CM and would like to become more deeply involved in it. Personally, I find many of the best moments to be a combination of Roleplay and combat. A predator fulfills that to the final detail.
In my point of view a predator is more than just an antag. They add to the enjoyment of everyone else through the various interactions others have with them. I hope to become a predator and bring those similar amazed, adrenaline, happy feelings I get from interacting or even just hearing a predator.
I believe I can perform the role with due order and respect that it deserves and as needed learn from others.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes I understand this and agree to it.
Cassius 'Santa' Klaus
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by TheMusician321 » 30 Dec 2017, 23:02

Your playstyle is okay, but as of lately it's going to be hard to role play with marines as lately they've just been shooting at preds on sight, Your backstory is rather short and it doesn't really tell us much of your Pred's personality other than he's rather religious.

My main problem is your lack of activity, I've never seen you in game (time zone thing probably.) and on the forums you only have 3 posts, now you might think that forum posts aren't all that important but they are, it shows us who you are OOCly and how you act when you're not in character, it also helps that the community would know who you are and if they trust you or not.

All in all I have to go with a -1, lengthen your backstory give us some knowledge of your pred's personality, let people know who you are and post more on the forums.
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Drownie » 31 Dec 2017, 07:21

I usually don't feel on right to evaluate someone, how I'm not totally known about Predators, but Cassius is a player almost unknown on the playerbase, and maybe all help is little.
I had a few encounters with Cassius, he's a neutral player and probably one who is very inactive, I haven't see Cassius entering in a RP how most of times he's just a cannon fodder, he also made a basic story only with the character modus operandi.
The player is not well know, do not have a RP historic, isn't active in forums, -1 totally.
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Vispain » 02 Jan 2018, 23:00

Ok. Thank you for the feedback. I have been a mostly active player for the last few months and believe that it would indeed be better for me to become more active and such in the forums. Thank you for the predator feedback TheMusician321. I'll be sure to come back when/if I can come up with a better application and have become more active in the community. Anyways, over the next few months hopefully I'll be thinking on the predator app, getting more involved in the community and continue to develop how I play and mature as a player and role player in general. This one was a bust on my part in several ways and looking back I can see some of it and hope to improve it drastically. The feedback has helped me realize I should be more active in the community first before try to become a predator and I understand that. I also realize the playstyle and story of the app should indeed be fleshed out.
Once again, thank you for the advice and criticism. It would really be great if a Admin could deny this one. It is subpar and I intend to try again once the time limit is over and I have really figured out the direction I want to go with this as well as have become more involved in the community. Any further advice, criticism, feedback is always appreciated.
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Kerek » 11 Jan 2018, 00:49

Your background is really short and doesn’t really tell us much about your character and I don’t really remember any interactions with your character. -1, sorry.
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by ghostdex » 11 Jan 2018, 18:07

Short background and pretty low forum activity, however I think I know your name so theres that. Overall it’s a -1 from me.
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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Feweh » 11 Jan 2018, 19:03

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Re: Karcas Na-Rath

Post by Feweh » 06 Feb 2018, 14:31

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