Short Story: Do No Harm

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Short Story: Do No Harm

Post by alekfenrir » 03 Nov 2017, 22:54

This was just an idea that floated past and I desiced to write it down to see what the final product would be.

Hope you enjoy the read! Thanks again to the folks who let me use refrence too their characters.
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Post by TheBeoni » 03 Nov 2017, 23:00

Why did i have to die first though. Jason did not even die on ICE yet actualy :D

EDIT: Died on ice very accurate description.
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Post by Drownie » 04 Nov 2017, 01:23

Are you the reincarnation of Shakespeare?
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Post by Thanteus » 04 Nov 2017, 05:20

Whew, sounds like some sort of story from space nam X3, i'm in it so I know its not. Either way, very nicely done, enjoyable read and an incredibly detailed account of what its like to be playing medic. lol
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Post by Monoo » 04 Nov 2017, 11:53

Don't piss off the person carrying a bag of combat-ready drugs.

Liked the story, wouldn't mind seeing more sometime.
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Re: Short Story: Do No Harm

Post by alekfenrir » 04 Nov 2017, 12:01

I've had a few odd ideas, this is the first one I've had kicking around that I put to paper, or pixels really but ya know. Might do more sometime.
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Post by Symbiosis » 04 Nov 2017, 22:44

Loved it! Would like to see more of Needles ventures!... loved the twist at the end 👍!
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Re: Short Story: Do No Harm

Post by alekfenrir » 03 Dec 2017, 22:50

Bwahaha.TheBeoni, just saw your Edit. Yea that’s how Ice goes, often for Charlie.
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